HUNTER (FIRST DRAFT)
THE GIRLS HAVE BEEN INVOLVED IN A LONG PHONE CONVERSATION AND ARE DISCUSSING BOYS.
EMILY: How's things with your boyfriend?
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: AMAZING! I think I love him ..
NEW FRAME
EMILY: [pauses] Love? I'm so happy for you [smiles]
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: How's about you? Have you met anyone?
NEW FRAME
EMILY: I met him on-line, his names Brad. He wants to meet me.. [Smiling]
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: YOU CANT! [Shocked]
NEW FRAME
EMILY: You can't tell me what to do!
EMILY HANGS UP THE PHONE
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COMPUTER SCREEN
FRIDAY 13TH PRODUCTIONS
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COMPUTER SCREEN
BRINGS YOU
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COMPUTER SCREEN
EMILY HARRY BRADLEY TAYLOR
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COMPUTER SCREEN
HUNTER
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COMPUTER SCREEN
SO YOU THINK YOU GOT AWAY?
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EMILY: How's things with your boyfriend?
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: AMAZING! I think I love him ..
NEW FRAME
EMILY: [pauses] Love? I'm so happy for you [smiles]
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: How's about you? Have you met anyone?
NEW FRAME
EMILY: I met him on-line, his names Brad. He wants to meet me.. [Smiling]
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: YOU CANT! [Shocked]
NEW FRAME
EMILY: You can't tell me what to do!
EMILY HANGS UP THE PHONE
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COMPUTER SCREEN
FRIDAY 13TH PRODUCTIONS
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COMPUTER SCREEN
BRINGS YOU
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COMPUTER SCREEN
EMILY HARRY BRADLEY TAYLOR
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COMPUTER SCREEN
HUNTER
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COMPUTER SCREEN
SO YOU THINK YOU GOT AWAY?
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We decided to keep the basics of the script the same but by changing the dialogue slightly for the beginning scene. We made it shorter so that it doesn't bore the audience and also made the conversation slightly more interesting. Also we added more computer screen's cut cut into the trailer to make it really fast and snappy. This being an effect that most Horror trailers entail.
HUNTER (Final)
ESTABLISHING SHOT HOUSE
-FADE IN-
THE GIRLS HAVE BEEN INVOLVED IN A LONG PHONE CONVERSATION AND ARE DISCUSSING BOYS.
EMILY: [Laughing] aww you guys are cute
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: yeah, what about you?
NEW FRAME
EMILY: [smiling] I met someone…
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: [smiling] who!?
NEW FRAME
EMILY: [Still smiling] His name is Brad Hunter, I met him on that chat room thing, he wants to meet...
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: [shocked] you can’t!
NEW FRAME
EMILY: You can’t tell me what to do
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: But Emily!
EMILY HANGS UP THE PHONE
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COMPUTER SCREEN – INTRODUCING FILM
A GOOD HUNTER
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COMPUTER SCREEN
LOVES
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COMPUTER SCREEN
THE CHASE
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COMPUTER SCREEN
FRIDAY 13TH PRODUCTIONS
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COMPUTER SCREEN
BRINGS YOU
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COMPUTER SCREEN
EMILY HARRY BRADLEY TAYLOR
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COMPUTER SCREEN
HUNTER
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COMPUTER SCREEN
SO YOU THINK YOU GOT AWAY?
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[EMILY screams]
ESTABLISHING SHOT HOUSE
-FADE IN-
THE GIRLS HAVE BEEN INVOLVED IN A LONG PHONE CONVERSATION AND ARE DISCUSSING BOYS.
EMILY: [Laughing] aww you guys are cute
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: yeah, what about you?
NEW FRAME
EMILY: [smiling] I met someone…
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: [smiling] who!?
NEW FRAME
EMILY: [Still smiling] His name is Brad Hunter, I met him on that chat room thing, he wants to meet...
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: [shocked] you can’t!
NEW FRAME
EMILY: You can’t tell me what to do
NEW FRAME
KAYLEIGH: But Emily!
EMILY HANGS UP THE PHONE
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COMPUTER SCREEN – INTRODUCING FILM
A GOOD HUNTER
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COMPUTER SCREEN
LOVES
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COMPUTER SCREEN
THE CHASE
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COMPUTER SCREEN
FRIDAY 13TH PRODUCTIONS
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COMPUTER SCREEN
BRINGS YOU
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COMPUTER SCREEN
EMILY HARRY BRADLEY TAYLOR
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COMPUTER SCREEN
HUNTER
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COMPUTER SCREEN
SO YOU THINK YOU GOT AWAY?
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[EMILY screams]
Writing the script was a struggle because we found it hard to come up with dialogue to match up with our trailer ideas. From looking at trailers on you-tube we discovered that a lot of them had several jump cuts from scene to scene, they also included a lot of quick fades to create tension. For Each short section of the trailer we need some sort of sound, whether it be music or dialogue. The dialogue was hard to come up with as it had to be short, snappy and memorable.